✨ Story Development

A gentle, structured pathway from first spark to finished manuscript—with a little extra cheerleading along the way.

This monthly support package blends accountability, email check‑ins, and dedicated brainstorming time with a guaranteed discount on editing later. You’ll get calm, encouraging support as you plan and write, plus a smooth, natural transition into editing once you’re ready. I’m here to be your personal cheerleader, on-call hype girl, and gentle taskmaster (when you need one).

Spark to Polished Story

Alpha Reading

Beta Reading

A supportive, big‑picture look at your early draft—offering clarity, direction, and a little cheerleading when you need it most.

This early‑stage read gives you thoughtful, honest insight into what’s working, what’s wobbling, and what your story needs next. You’ll get clear, encouraging feedback that helps you understand your draft’s strengths and opportunities without ever feeling overwhelmed. I’m here to help you see the heart of your story, stay motivated, and take your next steps with confidence and a touch of hype‑girl energy.

A thoughtful, reader‑focused look at your polished draft—highlighting what’s landing beautifully and what needs a little fine‑tuning.

This pass gives you clear, compassionate insight into how your story reads—the emotional moments that shine, the pacing that needs smoothing, and the places where readers may want a bit more. You’ll get warm, honest feedback that helps you refine with clarity and stay connected to the heart of your story. I’m here to cheer on what’s working, gently flag what isn’t, and help you take your draft to the next level with excitement.

🌕 Deep Craft Editing

Comprehensive

Line Edits

My deep‑dive line edit—the full glow‑up for your voice, emotion, and sentence‑level craft.

This comprehensive edit blends big‑picture insight with detailed, line‑by‑line refinement to help your story land with clarity, rhythm, and emotional punch. You’ll get one cohesive pass that strengthens your narrative arc and elevates every line, giving your manuscript that polished, intentional, “this is really working” feel.

Line Edits

My all-encompassing copy edit—the final shine that brings clarity, cohesion, and confidence to your prose.

This comprehensive edit pairs big‑picture awareness with meticulous, sentence‑level attention to help your manuscript read cleanly and confidently. I’ll smooth phrasing, tighten clarity, refine continuity, and make sure your voice stays strong and consistent from page one to “The End.” You’ll get a single, unified pass that supports your story’s structure while giving your prose that crisp, professional finish.

The sentence‑level glow‑up your story deserves—where voice, emotion, and clarity all get a thoughtful, intentional polish.

This line edit focuses on how your story reads—the rhythm of your sentences, the strength of your voice, and the emotional impact carried through your language. I’ll refine phrasing, smooth transitions, evaluate word choices, and help every line land with purpose and personality. You’ll get a polished pass that elevates your prose without losing the heart of your voice.

Comprehensive

Copy Edits

content + line edits in one pass

content + copy edits in one pass

🌙 Final Polish

Copy Edits

Proofreading

Formatting

Clarity, consistency, and polish for your final draft—delivered with the same fierce enthusiasm I bring to every story I’m trusted with.

Copyediting is where your story gets its final glow‑up. I’ll handle the technical side — grammar, usage, consistency, and clarity — while fiercely protecting the voice you’ve worked so hard to build. It’s a careful, detail‑oriented pass that smooths distractions, strengthens readability, and helps your manuscript feel clean, cohesive, and ready to charm readers (and maybe make them cry a little).

A final, detail‑focused check before you publish—handled with care and fierce attention to the tiniest things.

Proofreading is the last careful sweep through your manuscript to catch lingering errors and small distractions before your book heads out into the world. I zero in on the fine details—spelling, punctuation, formatting, and consistency—so your story reads smoothly and professionally while keeping your voice fully intact. It’s the calm before the launch, the polish before the shine, and the moment your words get their final glow‑up.

Professional manuscript formatting for both ebook and paperback—clean, polished, and ready for upload.

This service will take your finished manuscript and transform it into beautifully formatted ebook and print‑ready files. Think clean chapter layouts, consistent styling, proper front and back matter, and interior designs that feel intentional and easy to read. You’ll receive polished files that meet industry standards and are ready to upload directly to your publishing platform. It’s the final step that makes your book look as good as it reads.

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💫 Custom Support

Every story has its own heartbeat. If you’re looking for something more personalized, I’m happy to build an editing package that fits your project like it was made for it.

Alpha Reading

My specialty! Big‑picture story shaping paired with your choice of line‑level craft or copy‑level clarity and bit of hype-girl cheerleading along the way.

A comprehensive edit gives your book deep, story‑level support while also refining your prose in the way that serves you best. I’ll look at how your plot, characters, and pacing are working, highlight opportunities to strengthen emotion and tension, and help shine your narrative. You’ll get one cohesive round that elevates the heart of your story while also polishing your pages at either the line or copy level—whichever focus you choose.

• clarifies structure, pacing, and character arcs

• highlights areas where tension or stakes can be amplified

• highlights moments to deepen emotion or tension

• identifies plot gaps, logic issues, or unclear motivations

• highlights opportunities to deepen worldbuilding or atmosphere

• pinpoints pacing slowdowns or rushed moments

• includes edits letter, margin notes, and in‑text edits

• plus everything listed under either the Line Edits or Copy Edits heading below, depending on your choice of focus!

Clarity, consistency, and polish for your final draft—delivered with the same fierce enthusiasm I bring to every story I’m trusted with.

Copyediting is where your story gets its final clean-up. I’ll handle the technical side—grammar, usage, consistency, and clarity—while fiercely protecting the voice you’ve worked so hard to build. It’s a careful, detail‑oriented pass that smooths distractions, strengthens readability, and helps your manuscript feel clean, cohesive, and ready to charm readers (and maybe make them cry a little).

• refines sentence rhythm and flow

• smooths awkward or clunky phrasing

• deepens sensory detail and atmosphere where it matters most

• sharpens dialogue for authenticity and character individuality

• balances sentence variety

• eliminates overwriting, fillers, and repetition

• elevates word choice to better match genre and mood

• includes margin notes and in‑text edits

Proofreading

A final, detail‑focused check before you publish—handled with care and fierce attention to the tiniest things.

Proofreading is the last careful sweep through your manuscript to catch lingering errors and small distractions before your book heads out into the world. I zero in on the fine details—spelling, punctuation, formatting, and consistency—so your story reads smoothly and professionally.

• corrects spelling, punctuation, and minor grammar issues

• catches typos, formatting slips, and small inconsistencies

• ensures clean, polished pages ready for publication

• includes light margin notes when clarification is needed and in-text corrections

• A free five‑page sample edit so you can get a feel for my approach before committing—no pressure, just vibes and clarity.

• Each service includes one full editorial pass, with discounted rates available for additional rounds if you want more support.

• I follow the Chicago Manual of Style and Merriam‑Webster’s Unabridged Dictionary.

• Payment plans are always available. We’ll shape a schedule that supports your budget and timeline.

• AI will never touch your manuscript. Every edit is done by me, with my human eyes, my decades of experience, and my whole heart.

Rate: Most projects fall between $0.008 - $0.012 per word, depending on manuscript needs.

Rate: Most projects fall between $0.025 - $0.03 per word, depending on manuscript needs.

Rate: Most comprehensive line edit projects fall between $0.04 - $0.045 per word.

Most comprehensive copy edit projects land between $0.035 - $0.04 per word.

What to expect...

A gentle, structured pathway from first spark to finished manuscript—with a little extra cheerleading along the way.

This monthly support package blends accountability, email check‑ins, and dedicated brainstorming time with a guaranteed discount on editing later. You’ll get calm, encouraging support as you plan and write, plus a smooth, natural transition into editing once you’re ready. I’m here to be your personal cheerleader, on-call hype girl, and gentle taskmaster (when you need one).

Spark to Polished Story

• a warm welcome note to set expectations, gather your goals, and map out your timeline

• the “Be Brave” open‑email policy—reach out anytime for firm, encouraging support when the writing gets messy

• regular email check‑ins to keep you connected to your story and moving toward The End

• up to two hours of asynchronous brainstorming support through email or chat—perfect for talking through ideas, clarifying direction, or untangling plot chaos

• a guaranteed place in my editing queue when you’re ready to book

• 20% discount on editing when booked for the same project

Rate: $200/month (most authors use 3–6 months of support)

Want the full breakdown? Below, you’ll find the complete descriptions for each service—what’s included, how it works, and what you can expect from the editing process.

Line Edits

Copy Edits

Voice, flow, and emotional impact for your final draft—guided by my signature blend of craft, care, and hype‑girl enthusiasm.

Line editing is where your prose gets its true shine. I’ll refine the rhythm, tone, and clarity of your sentences while fiercely protecting the voice you’ve poured into every page. It’s a thoughtful, craft‑driven pass that smooths awkward phrasing, deepens emotional resonance, and helps each line land with intention. The result is prose that feels polished, expressive, and unmistakably yours—ready to sweep readers straight into the heart of your story.

• corrects grammar, usage, and word choice

• ensures consistency in style, details, and formatting

• smooths clarity and readability without changing your voice

• flags continuity issues or confusing moments

• polishes punctuation and mechanics

• includes margin notes and in‑text edits

Rate: Most projects fall between $0.02 - $0.025 per word, depending on manuscript needs.

Comprehensive Line/Copy Edit

A supportive, big‑picture look at your early draft—offering clarity, direction, and a little cheerleading when you need it most.

This early‑stage read gives you thoughtful, honest insight into what’s working, what’s wobbling, and what your story needs next. You’ll get clear, encouraging feedback that helps you understand your draft’s strengths and opportunities without ever feeling overwhelmed. I’m here to help you see the heart of your story, stay motivated, and take your next steps with confidence and a touch of hype‑girl energy.

Rate: Most projects fall between $0.005 - $0.007 per word, depending on manuscript needs.

• offers big‑picture feedback on plot, pacing, and characters

• identifies scenes or threads that feel unclear or rushed

• reflects on character motivations, relationships, and emotional throughlines

• calls out moments that land properly

• surfaces questions a first‑time reader naturally has

• helps you understand how your story is being experienced on the page

• provides clear next‑step guidance to support revisions

• includes margin comments, a compiled notes document, and unhinged hype‑girl commentary for those moments that deserve extra joy

Beta Reading

A thoughtful, reader‑focused look at your polished draft—highlighting what’s landing beautifully and what needs a little fine‑tuning.

This pass gives you clear, compassionate insight into how your story reads—the emotional moments that shine, the pacing that needs smoothing, and the places where readers may want a bit more. You’ll get warm, honest feedback that helps you refine with clarity and stay connected to the heart of your story. I’m here to cheer on what’s working, gently flag what isn’t, and help you take your draft to the next level with excitement.

• shares honest, reader‑level reactions as the story unfolds

• highlights emotional beats that land beautifully—or miss their mark

• notes pacing lags, rushed scenes, or moments that break immersion

• identifies lingering questions or threads that feel unresolved

• reflects on character chemistry, growth, and emotional payoff

• pinpoints clarity issues or confusion

• calls out scenes that make readers laugh, swoon, or tear up

• provides supportive, actionable feedback to guide your final revisions

• includes margin comments and unhinged hype‑girl commentary for those moments that deserve extra joy

Rate: Most projects fall between $0.004 - $0.006 per word, depending on manuscript needs.

Formatting

Clean, professional layouts that make your manuscript look as good as it reads.

I’ll transform your manuscript into clean, industry‑standard files that are easy to read, beautifully structured, and ready for upload. Chapter breaks, scene spacing, paragraph styles, headings, front and back matter—I’ll handle all the technical details so your story shines in its best possible presentation.

Rate: $0.007 per word

Ready to take the next step?

Whether your romance is contemporary, paranormal, romantasy, or something entirely your own, I’d love to hear about it—the tropes, the tension, the yearning, all of it.

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